Better than the first for sure, with more depth into the plot the whole story is now getting better with the introduction of her father, yes we all knew Valentine was going to be bad if you didn’t boom now you know! 😂
What actually interested me is how the warlock woman was easily copied to trick Clary.
The cop, was he pretending to want the cup and not to protect Clary when he was ‘interviewing’ the two people.
One part that I think should be improved is Clary’s manner of talking, should be a little more thicker and angrier like mean it when she shouts Simon.
Otherwise so far so good!